Thursday, November 27, 2008

L.E.P.E.R: Chapter 5

This is the sixth (and last) in a series of posts wherein I have presented a novel I started writing in high school. Please read the introduction post (link) for an explanation.



The crowd was beginning to disperse. The same boy who had stopped to stare at the stage had finally grown weary of staring at the once interesting stage. He walked away in search of a restroom, not because he was in need of the facilities; he just thought that a group of people standing around the restroom would look funnier than a group of people standing around the stage. The size of the crowd was diminishing but was still fairly large when Omar finally leaped to the stage.

Omar, once again wearing the gaudy clothing he had worn upon arriving at the city, spoke in a very dramatic speech. Everything he said made people think that he had written, revised, rewritten, and rehearsed every word. This was untrue. Omar had only written it once; he had made Joe revise it.

As the crowd noticed that something actually was occurring on the stage, each face in the crowd scrutinized the site before their eyes. A fearful silence fell across the crowd. The fear of a clown actually within a few feet of them was too much to handle. Many collapsed to the ground as they fainted. Others were scared stiff to where they couldn't move. One started laughing. Someone knocked him cold for his own safety.

Clowns are the second most feared humanoid in the whole galaxy. Ataxian history is split into ages, somewhat like a millennium. The ages are referred to by the name of an animal. This has caused enormous strife in past years as historians argued whether the present age was the age of the Fruitbat or the Ostrich. The last age before the age of the Fruitbat/Ostrich was the age of the Rubber Chicken, a horrific time when clowns ruled on high. A few older residents of Ataxia still remember the horrible age. The clowns were expelled from civilization by a large group of revolutionists to a remote planet in Ataxia. The planet had but one exit, which was sealed by strong magicks.

The most feared humanoid of the galaxy is remembered for the time when they roamed free, or The Great Silence. Mimes can occasionally be seen in the wilderness and are often found attempting to reenter the cities from which they were expelled.

Once the crowd calmed down a bit they noticed a few obvious differences between Omar and your average clown. Firstly, it is common knowledge that no clown will ever wear polyester. Clowns may wear baggy cloths, big shoes, and big red noses, but they still have some sense of fashion. Omar's outfit was made of 100% polyester. The second difference was the apparent absence of floppy shoes and a little flower that squirts water.

Omar spoke to the assembled crowd, "I see all your sad faces out there. I can tell that you are all in need of something." The something was probably a good day's wages, or in the case of Mary, a pony. "You need a cure."

Omar paused to let that last remark set in. The people nodded in agreement. "Yeah," they thought. "We need a cure." A man ventured the naive question, "A cure for what?" He was greeted with several Shh's.

"You need a cure for everything. And I have it." He held a bottle of the miracle elixir high. "This little bottle will cure any ailment a person can imagine." What he didn't tell him was the person he was speaking of was Ben Helpur, who had been dead for the past 10 years and wasn't imagining much of anything.

The crowd erupted in a chorus of ahh's. Omar was pleased; they were stupider than he had imagined.

Lister wasn't paying much attention, and due to her inability to pay anything other than the plumber, Mary wasn't paying much attention, either. His gaze was centered on a man who had just entered the crowd. He was dressed much like Lister and appeared to be up to no good. The man wandered through the crowd requesting people for money.

"Mary, I think we found picket-line breaker."

"Don't ask me for help. Me not know how to put line back together."



Omar was well under way telling the crowd about all the many ailments that could be cured by a single drop of his miracle elixir. He smiled to himself as he took in the stupid looks on the people's faces. A large sale was guaranteed with a crowd like this.

Joe had just begun his performance. His clothing had been replaced with the average clothing of a common leper. Not to say that there is anything extremely common about a leper. Lepers have never been able to make a very good living on planets which believe in embalming. In such places, people are continuously mistaking lepers for mummies, which isn't especially good for business. The lepers there have made the best of the situation by throwing curses at people who don't give them money. Joe could easily have passed off as a mummy, expect for his abundance of life not usually found in mummies.

Joe wandered through the crowd pretending to have as many illnesses as he could conceive. "Please mam," he said to a woman in the crowd. "Spare a coin for a poor destitute leper?"

"Oh you poor man. Of course I'll give you some money." The woman searched around in her handbag. She frowned as she obviously couldn't find what she searching for. She pulled a small card from the bag and said, "Do you take credit?"

Joe waved the card away and coughed as he replied, "That's all right. *cough* I'll be fine. *COUGH*"

"That's good enough proof for me," a voice said as it walked towards Joe. "Ok Mary, smash his head in!"

Mary lumbered through the crowd towards Joe. "Sorry." was the lost thing that Joe heard before Mary's fist planted itself on the top of his head.

The woman shrieked from the sight of the poor leper being knocked to the ground. "That poor man," she began. "Why did you have to go and strike. . ." She was knocked unconscious before she could finish her sentence.

Lister looked from Mary to the woman's prone body in the mud, then back at Mary, then back at the body, then at the sun. Staring at the sun always made Lister sneeze and he felt like sneezing. This he did, it made Lister feel good, but he knew there wasn't time to feel good. He and Mary had to make a swift exit.

At just that moment, Omar reached the point in his performance where he showed the crowd the amazing healing power of the miracle elixir. He turned to the fleeing Lister and said as sympathetic as possible, "Oh you poor man."

Lister, who hadn't been paying attention to anything that had been occurring, was shocked when he saw the tip of Omar's pointer finger facing right towards him. Lister made a motion as if to say, "Who? Me?"

"Yes you, my poor leprous friend."

Lister had no desire whatsoever to come anywhere near that stage, but the crowd had a big affect on his decision. The crowd grabbed him and tossed him onto stage. Well, not exactly. They missed by a few feet; his chin landed on the stage though. Lister turned to make another run for it, but it was obvious that he was completely trapped by the crowd. Giving in, he climbed up onto the stage.

Omar grabbed Lister's arm so as to position him in the most visible location for the crowd. If Omar had actually looked at the leper's face, he would have known that this specimen was not Joe. If this had happened, the occurrence would have been followed by a few frantic moments of silence as Omar contemplated his quickest escape. This did not happen though. Rather, Omar smiled at the crowd as if to say, "You guys are complete idiots, and I'll soon have your money." Being the complete idiots that they were, they translated the smile as, "I'm so happy that I can help you poor people."

"My poor leprous friend," he addressed Lister. "Because of your sad state, I will give you a free bottle of my miracle elixir."

Lister licked his lips at the thought of a free drink. Omar popped the cork off the elixir. Lister didn't need so much as a signal as he began downing the liquid. It tingled as it started to spread through his system. Lister paused halfway through the bottle to reflect on his new feeling. It felt as if for an instant his entire body went numb, then, instantly came back alive. The bizarre thing was that once the numbness was gone from his body, he felt revitalized to a level that he hadn't felt previously. Lister stood motionless as he contemplated the tingling in his body.

Omar swiped the bottle from Lister's hand. "Now we see what the amazing miracle elixir has done for this poor leper. Omar began unraveling the bandages that hid Lister's sore-covered body. Lister would have objected to the man undressing him, but he was still trying to get used to the new feeling that was sweeping through his whole bodily frame. Also, Lister didn't have to worry because he was wearing a white undershirt and some very sporty boxers with little dragons all over.

Finally, once the wrapping was totally removed, Omar realized, the person he had just "cured" was not Joe Smiley. This would have caused him to panic and flee, had it not been for the fact that the man who had been dressed as a leper turned out to be just that, a man dressed as a leper. No open sores could be found anywhere on the body. Their was a small scar on Lister's forearm shaped like a cloud, but apart from that, he looked perfectly healthy.

Lister's feeling was beginning to subside as a new feeling entered his body, the feelings of disappointment, anger, fear, and embarrassment all wrapped together. His awful body, the one he was always having to piece back together was completely healthy. A tear came to his eye. The small cloud of flees that accompanied him most everywhere dispersed.

The crowd broke into an enormous round of applause and cheers. People began yelling for bottles and waving money in the air. Lister was returned to the crowd in much the same way as he left the crowd, with a swift kick to rear.

Lister stayed in the pile of mud in which he had landed. It made him feel a little more comfortable. Mary attempted to help him up, but he had no desire to do anything but lie in the mud. All the while, people scrambled to get a bottle of Omar's amazing miracle elixir.

Magic. It's what makes the world go round. It's what makes the stars come up at night. It's what makes the sun rise and fall every day. Actually, that's only one theory. There are some heated debates occurring presently about what does make the sun rise and fall every day. The wizards swear that it's the magical field that surrounds every planet. Scientists contend that it's caused by some sort of daily explosion or, in their own words, a fairly big bang. The clergymen insist that the sun is dragged through the sky by a God, called the Great Willy Winky, wearing a large bowtie.

A heated argument has ensued for years concerning this question. Each party has fought the sympathy of the public. The whole issue is nearing an end. For the most part, the populous has chosen to side with the church. This is for a couple reasons. First, if you don't side with the church they'll probably get you with some sort of inquisition. And, the church's idea of the Great Willy Winky was recently popularized a song which hit the top five in every prominent city of Ataxia. Part of the chorus goes:

Great Willy Winky runs cross the sky.
Upwards and Downwards in his bowtie.

Realizing that they have lost the argument on what controls the sun's rise and fall, the wizards have dedicated their strength towards another effort. Namely, they dedicated their time to convincing the populous that magic is responsible for pickles.

Magic has needed improve its appearance in the eyes of the people. Everyone is always leery of magic. This is O.K. for most wizards. Who needs friends when you are the most powerful being on the planet. The problem with this is that Ataxian magic has yet to evolve to the strength of magic in other galaxies.

Ataxia has evolved at a much slower rate than most galaxies. The God of a planet is always responsible for prodding evolution along by doing stuff like planting big stone monoliths in front of monkey homes and giving someone the idea to invent slushies. Once civilization is going, Gods just have to sit around being worshipped and cause a tornado or two.

Evolution on Ataxia didn't work that simple. The Gods knew that they were supposed to build some big thing but couldn't remember that it was a monolith. Instead, they gave the inhabitants of Ataxia a big watermelon. While being very appreciated down below, it didn't help evolution. Ataxian residents have been forced to evolve almost completely by themselves. This causes some problems.

Magic's evolution has been a rough one in the hands of incompetent humanoid creatures. Magic is used by the commanding of the elements. With control of the elements one can have untold of power. Ataxian wizards are unable to control any element at all. They perform magic by requesting the element for what they want. This seems it would be fine, except for the elemental spirits.

Elemental spirits invisibly wander the worlds. They have full power of the elements. A wizard does not actually control the elements, but controls the elemental spirit. Their are many spirits walking across the planets and they move instantaneously to any point on the planet. Some stronger wizards will even have their own spirit which will come to them whenever they're needed. They work fine for the needs of evolved magicians, but have grown to be a major pain for Ataxian magicians.

Apart from having great power, elemental spirits are very rude and snobby creatures. They enjoy talking back to wizards when they try to cast spells. This doesn't make for very fast combat if you're pleading with an elemental spirit to create a fireball. The elemental spirits speak normally, but have a channeling power with their voice which allows them to be heard by only one or two people.

Elemental spirits are also very stubborn. They demand that wizards be polite. If wizards aren't polite to the spirits, they won't even bother responding. This is the most important element of Ataxian magic, the art of being polite to elemental spirits. Studying acolytes spend hours in their small cubicles at wizard's school practicing their politeness on such things as plants and doorknobs. Politeness to elemental spirits involves the same old stuff like, always say thank-you, always hold the door open for them, and don't cast a spell with your mouth full. The most important part of being polite to an elemental spirit is encapsulated in the word, "Bica."

Bica, pronounced beeka, is the arcane word for "please." Bica must always be said just before or just after the magic words are said. No spell would even be considered if it was not prefixed or suffixed with Bica.

Because of the need for politeness the rudeness of elemental spirits when attempting to cast a spell, the galaxy has never had to worry too much about magic getting too powerful. While magic can do some great damage in the wrong hands, it's repairable.



Melzar awoke with a jerk. If you would have asked Melzar, the jerk was Gord, but that isn't what I meant. What I meant was that Melzar awoke suddenly. He stood up in the small tent. Too small for Melzar to stand up actually. Instead, he had to crouch, which just wasn't the powerful figure message he was trying to get across. Gord hung helplessly from Melzar's arm, snoring.

As if he were speaking to an enormous crowd of his loyal subjects, he announced, "I had a dream."

'Hmm,' thought Melzar. "That sounded good! Let me try do that again."

Once again Melzar announced in a booming voice, "I had a dream."

Melzar's pleasure was interrupted by Gord's rather rude voice. "Master, I get the idea. You had a dream. But what was it about?!?"

Melzar glanced around embarrassingly. "Dream? Right. . . my dream."

Gord stared inquisitively at Melzar. At least, Melzar thought it was inquisition in Gord's stare. It's hard to tell with a puppet. Actually, the stare was just Gord looking tired.

"Well, I had a dream. . ."

"Master, we established that."

"We did? Oh yah, we did!"

Melzar was not a morning person. We thought he was, but he definitely wasn't. Actually, we wasn't an anytime person.

"Well, I dreamed that I was to conquer Slander by turning the populous into lepers unless they bow down and worship me as their king." Melzar stated this very triumphantly.

Incredibly, Gord was excited. Then again, if Melzar were the king, maybe Gord would be a duke or even better, a duchess. Gord responded excitedly, "Master, that's wonderful! So, in your dream you were told you would become the king of Slander?"

The gleam in Melzar's eye disappeared with Gord's degleaming statement. Gord noticed the drop in enthusiasm in Melzar's demeanor.

"Master, what's wrong? You should be joyous!"

Melzar had hoped that Gord wouldn't bring this up. "Actually, the dream told me that I would be unsuccessful."

Gord looked in udder surprise at Melzar. "Master, with all due respect, what?!? You aren't going to succeed?"

"Nope."

"Master, and you still plan to go on with it?"

"Yep."

"Master, that's dumb!"

Melzar knew Gord wouldn't understand. Handpuppets just don't understand this sort of thing. Then again, Melzar didn't understand it very well either. If he had been thinking straight, he would have gone home and forgotten about the whole thing. What stopped him from leaving was the last thing which HAzburn told him. He couldn't remember what it was exactly; all he could remember was something about movie rights. Melzar had no idea what movie rights meant, but he wanted to know, and going to Slander was the only way he would find out.

"I can't quite explain it," began Melzar rather sheepishly. "It has to do with something called movie rights."

"Master, movie rights? What is a movie rights?"

"I'm not sure, but that is why I need to go to Slander. I must discover movie rights."

Gord did not want to pursue it any longer, neither did Melzar. Gord was beginning to see his dream of becoming a duchess slowly seeping away.

"Master, if we are to go turn people into lepers in Slander, how do we get there?"

"The portal," responded Melzar rather simply.

"Master, beg your pardon, but we don't know where the portal is, remember?"

Before Melzar could respond--not that he was planning to respond--the bottom of the tent was torn completely in half. The object causing the tent bottom to rip was the same object which was about to cause the tent top to rip apart. The object threw Melzar back as it ascended from the ground.

The object was made entirely of wood planks nailed together. The structure looked large enough to hold one person--two in the case of Gord and Melzar. The object looked like a small house. The top came to a point and resembled a roof. The door was made from the same sort of rotten wood that the rest of the structure was constructed of. The door had one difference. A small moon shaped sigil cut through the otherwise plain wood face.

Gord stared in awe at the thing which was now occupying the largest portion of the tent. What it was, he didn't know. He just thought that it looked interesting. After all, Gord had no idea how they were able to get those little rainbow-colored marshmellows to float in jello, but he still liked the taste.

Melzar, on the otherhand, knew exactly what it was. Dusting himself off with Gord's face, Melzar stood erect, causing the point of his hat to poke through the tent roof, or rather, would have poked through the tent roof had the roof not been ripped apart. Melzar spoke in a low tone so as to prevay a sense of mysticism. "The portal." Instead, he prevayed a sense of talking quietly.

L.E.P.E.R: Chapter 4

This is the fifth in a series of posts wherein I have presented a novel I started writing in high school. Please read the introduction post (link) for an explanation.



Lister and Mary walked through the market together. Some people stopped to stare at the unlikely pair. But most people didn't stop. Rather, they turned around and went the other way. The few of the more unlucky ones who stopped to stare were accidentally stepped on as Mary walked by. Oaffs are not very good at doing two things at a time and currently Mary was having a difficulty talking to Lister as they walked, much less look where she was going. They were busy talking about astrology.

"Me Leo," answered Mary.

"Wow! Leo is my sign, too," exclaimed Lister.

Their job was pretty easy. All they had to do was keep an eye out for people begging for money. If they found someone, Mary's job was to beat their head into the ground. Mary's pay was whatever could be found after she smashed someone's skull.

It was mid-day and they hadn't found a single beggar yet. That's not to say that Mary hadn't smashed anyone's head. She had mauled two people so far. The first person was someone who was lighting a pipe. He made the grave mistake of asking Mary for a match. The second was a mime. It was an honest mistake, and no one really minded.

They had gotten quite bored so they decided that if anyone was going to do any begging, they'd have to come to them, because they were sick of walking around. They noticed a stage with a number of people standing around the parameter. They figured that something interesting must be going on.

Upon arriving in the crowd, they didn't notice anything on stage, but something had to be going on so they stood quietly and watched. Actually, nothing had been happening on stage for the past two hours. A young child was walking by the stage and stopped to stare at the interesting stage. A couple young women noticed the boy staring at the stage and walked over to discover what the child was examining. Before long, a large group of people had formed around the stage, all thinking that something was occurring of utter importance on the stage. For two hours the group kept getting larger and larger.

"What is everyone staring at?" whispered Lister.

"Shhhh!" responded a few people standing near by.

"Oh dear," began a very kind sounding voice behind Lister.

Lister turned to behold an old, hunch-backed lady. The lady had a smile on her face, which made her look like someone's grandmother.

"Yes?" questioned Lister rather cautiously. In Lister's experience, old ladies could never be trusted. The few he had encountered on the streets of Slander had been known to carry mace in their handbags. Once, when Lister was begging for some money, an old lady beat him over the head. He couldn't figure out how such a feeble women could be so strong with a mace.

"Oh dear," she repeated. "You're a leper. Oh please let me help. Here are four gold pieces." She held the gold pieces towards Lister.

Though he was happy she wasn't in the process of reaching into her handbag for a mace, he knew that it wouldn't be right to accept any money when they were on strike. "Thank you, but I can't accept you're money," he said as nicely as possible, while keeping an eye on her handbag in case she made a motion towards it. "You see, we beggars are on strike because of. . ."

Mary, who had been paying attention to the wonderful performance on stage, suddenly heard a word that grabbed her attention. She swung around as fast as possible and attacked the first person she saw, who happened to be the old lady. The lady crumbled to the ground like a circus tent whose support beams were all suddenly removed.

Lister's eyes bulged as he saw the woman crumble. He stared up at Mary then back at the corpse at his feet.

"Sorry, me thought she have match." Mary frowned as she realized the error of her action.

Lister shook his head and pulled Mary's arm. "Let's get out of here." He moved deeper into the crowd.

"Wait."

"What?"

"She have good mace in bag."



Omar and Joe stood beside the hot-dog cart. Both were deeply involved in the difficult job of eating their hot-dogs. Neither said anything as they considered the best way to go about consuming the food. Joe had obviously taken a more direct offensive strategy in eating the hot-dog because he finished much before Omar. Omar was a taking a defensive approach to the consummation of the hot-dog. Slow and steady.

Joe turned to Omar. "Omar?"

Omar responded by saying, "What do you want?" But because of the great amount of food in his mouth, Joe heard him say "Eh?"

"Have I ever told you what they put in those things?" he said pointing to the hot-dog.

Omar stopped mid-bite. The sound of his swallowing was easily heard by all. Pulling the hot-dog away from his face, he glared at it. He handed the half-eaten sausage to Joe, and with a sigh replied, "Fine! Take it!"

Joe smiled with pleasure at his insightful question. "Well, if you aren't going to eat it." The second was downed quicker than the first.

Omar stared at Joe in the same manner that someone would stare at someone who had just coned that someone out of a hot-dog. Omar did this until it got quite boring, approximately 12 seconds later. At this point he turned away from Joe, because it was obvious that Joe was oblivious to the reason for which Omar was staring at him.

As Omar turned away from Joe his laid hold of something that extremely pleased him. It pleased him so much that he nearly forgot about the hot-dog. . . nearly. Omar caught sight of the large crowd which was huddled around the stage down the street. He reached over and grabbed Joe's sleeve.

"Joe!"

"What? I'm trying to order another hot-dog."

"You can do that later, but right now, look!" Omar pointed down the street.

Joe strained to see what Omar was pointing at.

"Whoa! That's awesome!" Joe lit up like a lightbulb and, figuring that he had sufficiently satisfied Omar, promptly headed back to the hot-dog stand. His exit would have been successful had it not been for Omar's hand still holding onto Joe's sleeve.

"Let's go get a closer look."

Joe looked at Omar with a very surprised look. "What do you mean, get a closer look? It's only a three-legged dog. It is cool but I for one do not want to get a closer look!"

Omar's eyes bulged with Joe's words. He turned his head slowly, for effect, towards Joe. "Three-legged dog?!?" Omar was nearly yelling. It seemed to Joe that Omar was always nearly yelling, except for when he was yelling. "I wasn't pointing to that three-legged dog. I was pointing. . ." Omar turned back towards the stage, then stopped. He glanced around with his eyes, scanning the area around the stage. Then he continued his nearly yelling. "What three-legged dog?!?"

Joe scratched the back of his head innocently. "Well, there isn't actually a three-legged dog over there. I just said it 'cause I didn't know what you were pointing at." He ventured a smile.

Omar shook his head in disbelief. Omar muttered under his breath, "You are so stupid." Fortunately, Joe thought he had said, "You are so special."

Joe, figuring that the conversation was over, headed back to the hot-dog stand, but was prevented from getting there because of Omar's hand which had been wisely left on Joe's sleeve. "Come on! We have a show to do."



Melzar was lying on his back in the tent. He was completely unconscious. Gord lay next to him. Though he had been the winner of the fight, he was also lying unconscious, due to the unwise idea of giving the feet high fives.

The wasteland was laughing in the special way that wastelands laugh. A full description of how a wasteland goes about laughing would be to difficult too write in a few paragraphs because the explanation involves quantum physics and an extensive knowledge of the implications of orange jello.

This is one of the mysteries of the galaxy of Ataxia, orange jello. Years ago, a strange occurrence occurred, which strange occurrences seem to have a tendency to do. A small intergalactic portal formed in Miss Thelma Crumpetscone's kitchen on Earth. The portal was never discovered by Miss Crumpetscone, but before it disappeared, the portal was able to capture a small bowl of orange jello. This bowl of orange jello suddenly appeared in a temple on the planet Flekir, Ataxia. It was considered a gift from the Gods.

Many attempts have been made to replicate this orange jello. The closest anyone has ever come has been to make green jello with little colored marshmallows. There are many people who believe that once the secret to orange jello is discovered, we will know the answer to why people have bellybuttons.

Melzar was presently having a dream in which he had sneaked into the temple of orange jello and eaten the entire bowl of jello. It gave him a very satisfying feeling. When it came right down to it, orange jello tastes pretty good. As he was eating the last bit of orange jello, he heard a sound booming from all around him. The sound was a horrible screeching sound. Melzar covered his ears, which was not a good idea because he had been eating the jello with his hands. Jello dripped out of his ears.

The screeching stopped and was replaced by a quite rustling sort of sound. Then a voice came over the microphone. "Ahem. Testing. . .testing. . .one. . .two. . .three. Hey! Can you hear me down there?"

Melzar looked all around to find the owner of the voice. He responded nervously. "Yes. I can here you." Melzar continued looking around the room.

"Good!" replied the voice. The voice was a very pleasing voice. It sounded very familiar, but Melzar couldn't put his finger on where he had heard the voice. Melzar never would remember what the voice sounded like. When Melzar was a young boy he'd been captured by two earthlings from NASA. The earthlings brought him back to Earth and forced him to watch 24 hours straight of "American Bandstand" reruns. When they returned Melzar a week later they hypnotized him and made him forget everything that had happened. If he had not been forced to forget this, he would have realized that the voice was almost identical to that of Dick Clark's. Fortunately for him, he had forgotten.

"I am. . ." The voice stopped and cleared its voice. It then began again in a much lower, more ominous tone. "I am HAzburn, your guardian spirit."

"I have a guardian spirit?" Melzar was thoroughly surprised.

"OK, OK, maybe I'm not YOUR guardian spirit. You don't actually have a guardian spirit, I'm working overtime."

Melzar was slightly let down but tried to make the best of it. "Well it's nice of you to put in extra time to be my guardian spirit."

The voice's tone changed from ominous to condescending. "Look! I'm not exactly doing this for the job satisfaction! I said 'overtime!' That means I get paid more for this. No one else would even take the job." HAzburn paused. "I've got a family to feed you know."

"What does a guardian spirit get paid, Hazburn?" questioned Melzar.

"HAzburn."

"What?"

"My names HAzburn, not Hazburn."

"Oh, sorry. . .HAzburn. So, what do you get paid for this job."

"Orange jello with little rainbow-colored marshmallows."

"You get. . ." HAzburn interrupted Melzar impatiently.

"Look. I didn't come here to chat with you about my wages. I came to deliver a message." It was obvious that HAzburn was either getting impatient or just wanted to sound impatient.

Melzar was once again surprised. People did not often come with a message. Those who did usually did not leave looking the same as they had left. "You have a message for me?" Melzar sounded much like a child asking his mother for a cookie.

Unfortunately for Melzar, HAzburn did not sound like a mother giving a cookie to her child. He sounded much more like a mother who was now reconsidering why she had gone and given birth to a child. "Look. Just shut up and let me do the talking."

Melzar opened his mouth as if to say something, but he was actually just opening his mouth so he could put another spoon full of orange jello inside. He decided that talking back would not be a good idea. He wasn't sure why it was a bad idea, but he decided that it probably was.

"OK. I'm glad you've decided to keep your mouth shut. I promise that I won't be long. I don't so much have a message, more of a dream sequence. And here it is. . ." There was an exceedingly long pause during which the only sound was the faint rustling sound. Then Melzar heard an small explosion and HAzburn's voice cursing about some sort of projectile or projector or something.

HAzburn's voice returned. "Well, we are experiencing some technical difficulties here. We will be with you as soon as possible." HAzburn's voice was followed by even more cursing and the sound of machinery being moved around. The sounds continued for a few minutes. All the while, Melzar sat quietly eating the bowl of orange jello. He tried to think about why people had bellybuttons. After pondering the subject with no result, he concluded that it was only a dream so the orange jello didn't have any affect. It tasted good though.

The sound stopped and was replaced once again with the voice. "Sorry for the wait. We will now return to our previously programmed dream sequence."

Suddenly, the temple surrounding Melzar disappeared. Melzar was somewhat let down. The room didn't fade into nothingness. It didn't swirl around and disappear into a point. It didn't fog up and disappear by the time the fog lifted. It just plain disappeared. Melzar wasn't completely disappointed with the disappearance because he still held the half eaten bowl of orange jello in his hands.

The rustling sound was joined by a faint flipping sound in the distance, after which the darkness left Melzar. Not far in front of Melzar a large number three in a circle appeared. The circle behind the three resembled a clock because of the dim line that revolved around the center of the circle like the hand of a clock. The line jumped quarter hours very quickly. When the line returned to the straight up position, the number was replaced by a two. This happened again until the number was replaced with a one. After the line made the revolution, the circle disappeared with the number.

Everything was returned to darkness which faded away quickly to reveal a beautiful pond. Melzar was sitting on a lily-pad. The alarming thing was that he realized that he had been shrunk to the size of a frog, and even more alarming was that his orange jello was missing. Behind him he noticed a large-well, large to him now-castle. The castle walls were crawling with frogs in armour. They looked fearful to Melzar. He didn't know how he could tell, they just seemed fearful. He turned back around to see a gigantic chef tromping through the water. Instinctively, Melzar leaped out and bit the man's leg. The chef fell to his watery death.

Everything once again blinked to darkness. "Sorry," interrupted HAzburn. "Wrong dream."

"Look," HAzburn explained. "I'll just tell you what was in the dream. Basically, you are supposed to go to Slander and turn everyone into lepers until they declare you king out of fear. It was a very simple dream."

Melzar's whole body shuddered with excitement and because he needed to use the bathroom-orange jello can do that to you. "So. . ." Melzar could hardly speak from his excitement. "So I succeed?!?"

"Of course not." HAzburn laughed at Melzar's naiveté. "You fail miserably. You're the bad guy; you have to fail. Do you really think that anyone would buy the movie rights if you were victorious?"

"Movie rights?"

"Never mind. I've delivered my message and now I'm leaving."

Melzar spoke anxiously. "But you can't leave. I have so many questions."

A bland monotone voice replaced HAzburn's. "The number you have reached is no longer in service. Please hang-up and dial again."

Melzar stood feeling hopeless in the remnants of his dream. He thought about pondering the events that had just occurred, but he realized that his dream was almost over and he hadn't finished the orange jello.



Herbert was an ordinary frog, but he had always felt he had an important purpose. The night before he had a dream that proved to him that he was important. He wasn't sure what the dream meant, but it had quite a few people with parts falling off all the time, and he was given a crown. He knew that this dream was sent by the Gods to show him his purpose. Regrettably, before he could discover what exactly that purpose was, a chef captured his entire kingdom and served his legs for dinner.



Continue to Chapter 5

L.E.P.E.R: Chapter 3

This is the fourth in a series of posts wherein I have presented a novel I started writing in high school. Please read the introduction post (link) for an explanation.



The sun had just recently clawed its way past the horizon, and the first signs of morning were descending on the market. Merchants were busy preparing their stands for the business expected to come later that day. Anything one would ever want could easily be found in the market, be it fish, jewelry, assassins, and miracle cures.

Invigorated by a night's rest in one of Slander's less famous taverns, Joe and Omar were just as busy preparing their wares. A small stage folded out from the side of the carriage. Though not large, the stage was big enough and sturdy enough to hold about five men. A shelf, full of MIRRACUL ELICKSUR, was positioned near the back of the stage. It was crammed full of bottles; the two expected an enormous sale. Joe and Omar had circled around out of sight behind the stage to discuss the day to follow.

"OK Joe," began Omar, much like a coach getting ready to give his team a final pep talk before the state championship. "Here's the plan."

Joe was listening, but one wouldn't know it by looking at his face. He appeared as if he had consumed a little bit too much Slanderian ale the night before. Slanderian ale had an interesting affect on people not accustomed to it. It was so potent that it could make even the most sober person in the world drunk with one small sip. The odd thing about getting drunk on the ale is that you only remain drunk for a few seconds. Instead of a Happy Hour, most Slanderian bars had a Happy Minute a few times every day.

This could have been the cause of Joe's absent look, but Joe hadn't had any ale of any kind the night before. The real reason for Joe's expression was that he had suddenly started wondering what it would be like to be a campfire. The idea was meant to hit an inventor in stand near Joe and Omar's stage, but it had missed. If the idea had met it's mark, the inventor would have made a breakthrough in fire proof clothing, but instead, he became a door-to-door anvil salesman. Such is the way with ideas.

"You will be. . .," Omar stopped as he noticed the vacant look in Joe's eyes, who was currently leaping back and forth through the campfire. "Joe? JOE!"

Joe shook his head, sending the idea flying into a nearby cart of herrings. "Sorry, I was thinking about something. What were you saying?"

Omar let out a sigh of disapproval as he continued with his previous train of thought. "What we do is this. Dressed as Dr. Bumble, I will be on stage at the start. You will be wandering around in the crowd, dressed as a leper. When I--"

"Wait just a second!" Joe Smiley interrupted. "Why do I always have to be the leper?!?"

"Who else do you expect to be the leper? Me?"

Joe nodded.

"You're a much better leper than I am," pleaded Omar.

"I don't care. I'm not going to be the leper this time," demanded Joe, much like a child demands that it is his turn on the merry-go-round.

"But, Joe--" pleaded Omar again.

"I'm not listening to you until you let me be the doctor." With that Joe plugged both ears with his pointer fingers, and began humming. It was obvious to Omar that Joe had somehow misplaced his maturity. This was not exactly true. Joe had simply tied it to the tracks in front of Omar's train of thought.

"Don't be chil--"

"I'm not listening!" shouted Joe.

Omar attempted to say more but was drowned out by Joe's singing. "Ohhhh, say can you see?"

Omar was about to incapacitate Joe with a swift kick to the head, but stopped in confusion.

"See what?" Omar said in puzzlement.

Joe unplugged his ears. The ropes tying his maturity to the tracks had come somewhat loose, but it had been successful in derailing Omar's train of thought. "What do you mean, 'See what?'"

"What were you asking if I could see?"

"I didn't ask you anything. I distinctly remember being mad at you and not talking to you."

"You said 'Ohhhh, say can you see?' See what?"

"I don't know."

"Why did you say it then?" inquired Omar.

"Beat's me. It just sorta, came out." Joe shrugged to show that he hadn't any idea. Both stood staring at one another in bewilderment until Joe finally said, "Where was I?"

Omar opened his mouth as if to answer. Noticing an easy target, a passing idea threw itself into Omar's gaping mouth. Omar hesitated for a moment as the idea settled in and found a place to sit, then a smile stretched across Omar's face.

"You were about to tell me that you demand that I be the doctor," said Omar.

"I was? I mean, I was! You always get to be the leper, so it's my turn!" demanded Joe.

"All right, all right! If it's that important to you, you can be the leper, but hurry up. A small crowd is starting to form."

With that, Omar grabbed the doctor's costume and rushed around to the front.



Jarol gazed admiringly at the picketers. Though not admiringly, many shoppers had stopped to gaze at the group of strikers. All observers had made sure to keep a safe distance from the stinky convocation of street rats. A few bodies lay strewn across the cobblestones, once belonging to daring souls who had ventured a bit too close. In fact, the stench was preventing the police from breaking up the strike.

Rumors were spreading like wildfires across the crowd. Each spectator had a different opinion of what the group was doing. Most agreed that they were selling something, because most of the signs proclaimed "SALE!" The confusion was over what exactly they were selling. Though many opinions were floating around, the most excepted one was that they were advertising some sort of new deodorant. A few in the crowd did not even think that they were selling anything. One man near the back thought that they were performing a three-ring circus. It's obvious that the man was blind.

There's the thing with being blind. You never have to worry about not enjoying something that you are staring at. If you are staring at a large pile of bird droppings, you can easily imagine that you are staring at a large pile of walrus droppings instead. Hey, you're blind so what's the difference. This particular man, David, had been a very intelligent and observant man, until one day he noticed the benefits of being blind. At that point, he closed his eyes on the world, literally. He wanted to become a beggar but they wouldn't allow him to join their ranks because he had a house with indoor plumbing.

Jarol stepped away from his quite vigil. Turning down a nearby alley he was immediately confronted with the dirty faces of Lister and a large Oaff. The Oaff wore a small sticker on the front of his shirt. It was blue with a large white stripe in the middle. The writing on the sticker read:
Hello, My Name Is
George

Jarol stepped up to the towering oaff. Speaking in a voice barely above a whisper, Jarol addressed the oaff, "Good day George." Jarol considered extending his hand in fellowship, but wisely chose not to after seeing the creatures enormous hands.

The oaff's face gave a look of mindless wonder as he stared off into space. This was a little bit deceiving for the oaff was actually only mindless. Wonder was far above the creature's head. After a few moments, the oaff realized that the two others present were staring at him. This made it feel very self-conscious, which is not an easy thing to do.

The creature might have said something intelligent like, "Good day, sir." or even "How do you do?" but instead it decided to simply say, "Huh?" That is the interesting thing about oaffs they are not actually stupid in thought. They often come up with amazing ideas, but the problem is that they think that their intelligent ideas are stupid and their stupid ideas are intelligent.

"I said, 'Good day, George." repeated Jarol.

"Who George?" replied the oaff.

Having worked with oaffs before, Jarol was not surprised in the least by the creature having forgotten its name. Jarol figured that the reason for the name-sticker was not to aid others in divining its name, but rather to aid the oaff in remembering it. "You are George," he stated.

"Me? George?" said the oaff in a surprised manner. "No, me not George. Me Mary!"

"Mary?" asked Jarol. "But your shirt says 'George.'"

"That not say George," said Mary as if talking to a group of 1st graders. "It say egroeg si eman ym olleh!"

"What is 'egroeg si eman ym olleh?'" inquired Lister, who had been listening to the conversation up until now.

Mary scratched its head for a moment, trying to fool people into believing that it was thinking. After a few moments he replied, "Me don't know. What it mean?"

Lister looked back in bewilderment. "You don't know what it means?"

Mary scratched its head again. The oaff almost got them believing that it was thinking, but not quite. Frowning, Mary replied, "That dumb joke!"

Jarol let out a sigh of disgust, after which he glared at Lister.

Lister knew exactly what Jarol was trying to say with the look. He answered the glare defensively, "He was the only oaff I could find."

"She!"

"What?" questioned Lister.

Mary glared down angrily at the two lepers. "Me not man! Me woman! You think I look like man?!?" Mary began sobbing.

Lister just plain avoided Jarol's glaring look. He turned to Mary in an attempt to console the sobbing creature. "I didn't mean to hurt your feelings. We both think you are--GULP--beautiful."

With a face drenched in tears, she turned to the two. "You not mean that! You think me ugly! And you right too!" Mary burst into another fit of tears.

Unfortunately, Lister and Jarol both knew that she couldn't have been more correct, but if they were convince her to help them, they would have to do something. Suddenly, a lightbulb formed above Lister's head. Actually, it would be more correct to state that a lightbulb fell from above onto his head. However it came to be above Lister's head, it gave him an idea.

Trying to sound as sincere as possible, he asked the sobbing oaff, "I think you are so beautiful that I was wondering if I could invite you to dinner tomorrow."

Jarol's jaw dropped. Mary stopped crying and her face lit up. "Yes, me happy to 'comp'ny you." Incredibly, Smiling made her look even stupider.

Mary turned to Jarol, "What me need to do?"

Jarol was glad that Mary changed the subject. Jarol didn't know if he had the skill to accomplish such a task himself. "The beggars are on strike, and we. . . Mary? Why are you hiding behind Lister?" Jarol stared quizitively at Mary.

"Sorry. Last job I have, me was match lighter."

"Match lighter?"

"Me stand at parties and people say 'strike' when they need strike match to light pipe."

"What's a match?"

"Me not know, but they hurt!"

"Anyway," Jarol began, very exhausted with the conversation. "We beggars are on. . . having a protest. None of us are allowed to beg for money until the st. . . protest is over. Your job is to smash the head of anyone who crosses the picket line."

Mary stared blankly--it was the only way Mary knew how to stare--at Jarol. It was evident to the two lepers that they had lost Mary at 'We.'

"Lister, take Mary and tell her when to smash someone's head."

"Yes, sir!" replied Lister.

Jarol headed back towards the strike. As he walked off, he muttered as many cuss-words as he could think of, which wasn't very many. Actually, he couldn't think of any good cuss-words because his mind was entirely too befuddled from talking to the oaff.



The bleak, sun-scorched wasteland stretched out in every direction. Well, maybe not stretched. By saying stretched it sounds as if the wasteland was having difficulty covering the enormous expanse of land, but it was quite obvious that the wasteland wasn't even working at all to cover the land. Actually, the land welcomed the wasteland covering it. Then the land didn't have to be scorched by the sun and didn't have to worry about women in high-heels walking all across them. Indeed, it was a good life to be land covered by wasteland.

At this moment, the wasteland was not very happy. You see, wastelands enjoy the sun. It makes sure they keep a good tan in case a glacier happens to go flow by. The sun also keeps away women in high-heels. But at the present moment a small tent was casting an annoying shadow on the wasteland, which was preventing the wasteland from tanning evenly. Unfortunately, without opposable thumbs, the wasteland couldn't do much to help its situation.

The tent was not an empty tent, quite the opposite actually. The tent contained two individuals. . . OK, one and a half individuals. As it turns out, these one and half individuals were not especially happy either.

"Master? I thought you said that the portal was near by!" said the half an individual in a tone reserved for getting mad at the TV repair man.

The entire individual turned very slowly towards the half an individual propped on his hand. He had practiced this glance for a long time, but had not had occasion to make use of it. Basically, it involved turning your head slowly as your eyes got progressively larger; then, upon reaching his target, he would glare at him. Unfortunately, his response was not quite as dramatic, "Shut up."

"Master, I can't believe you can't find the portal!"

"I'm not the one who ordered all of the roads to be destroyed after I conquered the planet," replied Melzar.

"Master, oh sure! Just turn the whole thing around! It's my fault isn't it!?! Sure, blame it on the poor defenseless hand puppet. Who fed you when you were young? Who picked up the spoon so you could eat your smashed carrots?"

Melzar looked very ashamed. "I'm sorry Gord. Can you ever forgive me?"

"Master, well. . ."

Melzar's mind suddenly clicked with the word 'Master.' "Wait a minute. What am I talking about? I am I apologizing? I'm the master around here!"

"Master of Stupidity is more like it!" Gord would have stuck out his tongue, but his design did not allow him to do this, because his tongue was drawn on.

Melzar paused for a moment as he thought of a creative come back. "I am rubber you are glue!" Melzar failed with the creative part.

"Master, you might have rubber for brains."

"That's it! Come on!"

"Master, what?!?"

"Let's fight!" Melzar stood and began bouncing around like a boxer. The hand with Gord on it was out in front of Melzar while his other fist looked ready to punch.

"Master!?! OK, I'll fight you but I warn you, you're out-numbered!"

"Out-numbered? There's only one of you."

"Master, that's what you think. Feet!! Attack!!"

The scene that followed was all but pretty.



Continue to Chapter 4

L.E.P.E.R: Chapter 2

This is the third in a series of posts wherein I have presented a novel I started writing in high school. Please read the introduction post (link) for an explanation.



Thousands of years ago, when Ataxia was still a very young galaxy and the gods were not as wise as they are today, the Gods were sitting in the meeting hall of their palace. The Gods had come up with a big problem. All problems were big for the Gods. A small problem is hardly a matter of which Godly beings should trouble themselves with.

The problem they were confronted with at this current time was the problem of travel throughout Ataxia. To make Ataxia a truly great galaxy and therefore a place worthy of being destroyed, the spheres of Ataxia had to be connected in some way to allow travel between the separate spheres.

Many ideas were tossed around. As is the case with most committees, especially those being devised of either extremely intelligent or extremely stupid people, the later in this case, no one actually listened to anyone else's ideas. It was a general agreement that the object of meetings was to throw out the most ideas, useful or useless, while still attempting to avoid listening to anyone else's ideas.

The meeting went on and on until the supply of complimentary donuts was expired. The Gods slowly slipped out one by one, attempting not to be noticed. If noticed, they would glance down at their watch and exclaim, "Oh no! I'm late!" They would then escape before they had to answer for what they were late. This continued until the only thing left in the hall was an empty box of donuts.

As is usually the case in Ataxia, the resolution of how to connect the spheres was left up to the citizens of Ataxia. A group of wizards were assembled to devise a plan. The chairman wisely chose not to bring donuts to the meeting. After several hours of boring debate, the wizards arrived at a solution.

An intricate network of magical--what did you expect, they're wizards--portals was to be designed to connect the spheres with one another. Each portal was to be placed in a carefully chosen place. Cities quickly sprung up around these new intergalactic portals. Most planets welcomed these new forms of travel, but not all. Some planets were so opposed to these portals that they went to great lengths in preventing their usage by doing such things as posting guards at the portals and building impenetrable structures around the doorway.

Though the general consensus amongst the spheres is that the portals are a great asset, the portals are all heavily guarded to prevent the entrance of questionable characters to their country. The portals were quite small and they did not lend themselves to transfer of large numbers of people, so a full fledged attack from another world was unlikely, but it was always good to be careful.

The portals are the most common medium of which Ataxians use to travel between the spheres, but it is said that other options of travel exist for those who know how to use them.



Melzar marched out of his throneroom triumphantly. Gord swung helplessly at the wizard's side. He entered a room full of books and shelves. The room had been aptly named, the library.

The library had never received much use. Melzar was never very fond of reading or studying. Originally, his tower had been built without a library, but recently, a few fellow mad wizards had visited his tower to judge whether or not Melzar was worthy of becoming a member of the Mad, Evil Wizards Union. His request was denied due to his tower's lack of a library and his hairlessness. He then decided it wise to construct a library.

Melzar scanned the rows of volumes in search of one he needed. Most of the books were duplicate copies of the exact same set of encyclopedias. While constructing his library, he had stumbled upon a flee market and had purchased twenty sets of encyclopedias.

Finally, his eyes spotted the reference he had been searching for. His hand reached up and pulled a weathered book with the golden inscription on the cover announcing the title to be, "Herman's Guide to Ataxia." The book was a sort of travel guide for the Ataxian traveler.

Melzar stepped to a table with the enormous book. Setting it on the table, he blew the dust from its cover and progressed to the table of contents. The book was comprised of three sections, appropriately entitled: section one, section two, and section three. Section one consisted of maps and charts of all known cities and planets in Ataxia. It even contained a few planets which no one had and has ever discovered. The second section was comprised of page after page containing descriptions of every city and planet. The third and final section was added to make the book appear larger. The editor claimed the section to be area for notes, but in truth, it was 1003 pages of blank paper. When writing a tome for magical libraries, it is the general agreement between authors that bigger is better.

Melzar skimmed through the second section. His eyes scanned the pages as they flew by his face. Suddenly, his eyes noticed something of interest. Flipping back a few pages, he found the word that had caught his attention. The word happened to be, "Slander." He lowered his eyes to read the text which followed.

"Slander, the largest and wealthiest city of the planet Libel, is a popular vacationing spot throughout Ataxia. Its enormous market and gracious acceptance of foreigners are only a few of the things that attract tourists to this booming metropolis. All are welcome to the city, and encouraged to spend large sums of money. The city is ruled by a governor who is elected every five years. This is city is also home to one of the Seven Wonders of the Galaxy, the city gates."

Melzar's lips curled up in an evil grin. With a withered finger he pointed to the bold city name, "Here we will begin our conquest!!!" Melzar cackled maniacally at his discovery. Gord joined in the evil display of joy.

"We will leave immediately," Melzar stated as he finished laughing.

"Master, of course, but how will we conquer the city?"

"That I do not know, but we will go to this city and there we will formulate a plan to take control of the puny citizens."

Turning to the first section of the tome, the wizard pin-pointed the easiest path of travel. Luck shined upon him, for a portal was located not far from his tower which would bring him directly to Slander.

Slamming the book shut, the sage stood up from his seat at the table. Speaking to Gord he stated, "It is only a short ride from here, and if we leave now, we will be able to reach the portal before sundown."

"Master, let us go then."

The two shared one more maniacal laugh before they gathered their things to leave.



Though Slander was an enormous city, it only contained one bridge. This was probably because Slander did not have a river going through it, unless you count the rivers of sewage flowing down the streets. The bridge had been the result of a architectural mistake. The governor of Rednals, a nearby city-state, had ordered the construction of a bridge. Unfortunately, the architect who was hired for the job, unbeknownst to the governor was dyslexic, and as a result, the bridge was built in Slander instead.

Nevertheless, it was a beautiful bridge for which the citizens of Slander held no small amount of pride. The bridge, though seemingly useless without water, had come in handy on a number of occasions.

The beggars of the city were especially complimentary of the bridge. It is difficult to find appropriate sleeping and dining accommodations without a bridge. Until the construction of the bridge, beggars had been known to sleep on occasion in taverns and a few even had houses. When the bridge was built, a hoard of beggars moved under the bridge. One of the efforts of L.E.P.E.R. was to encourage the erecting of another bridge, as the present one was beginning to get somewhat crowded.

The section in which the L.E.P.E.R. meeting was to take place was beginning to fill with a motley crew of beggars and lepers. The idea of an organization for beggars had appealed to the local beggars.

The last few months had been pretty scary times for the beggars. Only two months prior, the governor had signed a city ordinance that would clean up the streets of Slander dramatically; the governor appropriated funds for a sewer system, which was under construction at this very time. As if that wasn't bad enough, two days ago the governor passed another ordinance that setup fines for people littering. Beggar life was starting to look pretty bad.

By sundown all but two of the people who had been contacted had shown up. These two people were, as it turns out, dead, but had been known to frequent the evening streets of Slander on occasion.

A leprous man stepped up to an overturned cardboard box which was apparently to act as a pulpit. Jarol was the man's name. He had been the originator of L.E.P.E.R., and as such was also the self-appointed president. His history of beggaring was second in length only to Tom. Jarol was a master, while only around 40 or 50 years old, he gave the appearance of at least 100. He had been one of the rare but lucky infants born with leprosy. While most children come out head first, then the rest of the body when born. Jarol had been born a piece at a time. After birth, he was assembled. Many considered him a prodigy, but everyone respected him.

"Ahem!"

The group of beggars in attendance fell quiet in an instant. The only sound in the assembly was that of Jarol picking up his jaw and putting it back in place.

"I am glad to see that such a large group of you have come together to this first meeting of L.E.P.E.R.," began Jarol in a very stately manner. "I'm sure that you all know why we have assembled this evening."

"In my day," came the voice of Tom from the congregation. "We didn't need reasons to meet. Of course, back then we didn't ever meet due to all the flooding, but we loved it!"

"As I was saying," Jarol sent a cold glance at Tom. Tom either didn't notice or chose not to notice, "I'm sure you all know why we have assembled this evening."

The crowd nodded in an attempt to show that they comprehended what was progressing, but it is unlikely that many of them had any idea what was taking place.

"As you know, the governor of our great city has deemed it necessary to clean up the streets of Slander." Jarol watched as some of the faces started to change with his last words. "Do you understand what that will do to us?"

A voice volunteered to answer from the crowd, "There'll be no sewage to lie in."

"Precisely!"

"Disease and plague will be reduced!" volunteered another.

"Exactly!"

"We will be forced into homes!" This last statement sent a gasp throughout all those in attendance. The eyes of every beggar glanced at their humble home. All were fearful at the thought that one day they might be ripped from their current home under the bridge to a civilized house. The house might even have this cut deeper than anything running water.

"Will we let the governor tear us from our filthy existence?!?" Jarol shouted at the beggars.

"NO!" cried the motley-crew.

"We must take a stand and show the governor that you don't push around a leper!"

The bridge erupted in the cheers of excited beggars. One soul ventured amongst the cheers, "But what can we do?"

"Tomorrow, at dawn, we make our demands known to the governor and all the city. Tomorrow we go on strike!"

Once again the bridge exploded with cheering beggars. All were filled with encouragement. They were tired of being treated as gentlemen and ready to be treated as what they were, beggars and lepers!

"Tomorrow, at dawn, we meet at the Southern entrance to the marketplace. Meeting adjourned!"



The governor marched purposefully through the archway. The governor wore a long flowing robe of yellow. On numerous occasions, he had been advised by friends and family that yellow was not the most royal of colors. For his last birthday, he was given a very majestic wardrobe of purple robes and hats, but he refused to wear any of it. The robe dragged several feet behind him as we walked. It is the general consensus that the more awkward the clothing, the more important the wearer.

As he approached the guard to his conference chamber, he stated as politely as is befitting a political figure. "Good morning, Francis."

"Um... Phebus,... sir!" the powerful man responded cautiously. Phebus had never known the governor to be a cruel man, but it was always wise to be careful around high-ranking officials.

"Sorry about that. I do that everyday, don't I?" responded the governor in a matter-of-fact sort of tone.

"Um... Yes, sir!" Guards are not very fond of speaking with anyone, much less important people. If Phebus had wanted to interact with people, he would have joined the city-guard or the circus.

"Well good! At least we are consistent! Keep up the good work!" With a quick salute, the governor was gone into the conference room. Phebus let out a sigh of relief and went back to counting the stones on the floor.

The walls of the conference room were adorned with maps displaying locations from all across Libel and a few from other spheres of Ataxia. A large oak table was situated in the center of the room. Four men were already seated around the circular table, leaving one chair open for the governor. As the governor entered the room, all stood to recognize the man. Their greeting was met by a salute from the governor. The governor always enjoyed saluting and did so whenever the opportunity arose. The men stayed standing until the governor found his seat.

"Good morning to you men," greeted the governor. The rest responded with similar pleasantries.

"Now to business," stated the governor in a purposeful manner. "Is there any business to discuss?"

All in attendance fell silent. Each looked at one another in an uncomfortable way, trying to not be seen.

"Anything?" the governor said almost pleading.

A large man in armour stood. "Well, your majesty..."

"Yes?"

"There seems to be some sort of demonstration forming at the southern entrance to the market."

"Demonstration?" asked the governor in a surprised, yet excited fashion; it had been quite some time since they had had business to talk about in these conferences. Usually, they just sat around and stared at one another, very boring.

"Yes, sir. It seems that the beggars of the city have decided to go on strike."

The governor stood as he exclaimed, "What!?! How can beggars go on strike?" The governor was starting to realize that staring isn't all that boring after all.

"I'm not sure, sir. All I know is that they are picketing and won't except any handouts. What should we do?"

"Nothing!" snapped the governor. Governors had to worry about serious matters, and everything that he knew pointed at the fact that this was not a serious matter. He didn't have time to worry of simple matters like beggar strikes. He had to worry about important things, even if he couldn't think of any important matters at the moment.

"But, sir "

"I will not be bothered with simple things like this. Now, let's have a seat and get back to work."

The governor smiled as he returned to his seat. He felt that he had handled that quite well, even if he hadn't handled it much at all.

"Now, where were we?" inquired the governor.

"We were staring at one another, sir." responded the man to his left.

"Ahh, of course."



Someone looking down from a window high above the market would probably have mistaken the crowd of dirty creatures below as a swarm of rats. If that same person were to investigate what was occurring below, he would approach the crowd, and from the smell, he would be convinced that it was a convocation of rats. After which, he would return to his room and avoid the gathering all together.

Actually, if that person had listened to his eyes rather than his nose, he would have noticed that, though not much higher on the food chain than rats, the crowd consisted of a large number of beggars and lepers. But that is the way with Slanderian citizens. The sense of smell often ruled out above the sense of sight, causing some strategic business decisions in the market. The fruit carts could always be found surrounded by numerous other dealers, while the sauer kraut dealer never had to worry much about other merchants stealing his location.

The beggars--who all of the merchants were avoiding at the moment--were almost organized. It had been a difficult ordeal, attempting to organize the disordered group of misfits. One that Lister and Jarol had not had an easy time accomplishing.

Most of the beggars carried signs. Their illiteracy made the picketers seem more like a advertisement than a group of serious strikers. Some signs were left over from a recent sale at Bert's Slightly Used Armour Emporium. Another couple signs were found in the garbage after a yard sale. Most were very colorful and bright, but the signs did not very well portray their reason for striking. Nevertheless, the important thing to them was having a sign, not the words which were written upon it.



Continue to Chapter 3

L.E.P.E.R: Chapter 1

This is the second in a series of posts wherein I have presented a novel I started writing in high school. Please read the introduction post (link) for an explanation.



A carriage flew through the city gates. Arrows placed themselves somewhat less than gently in the sides of the escaping vehicle. The fat man driving the carriage hopped and bounced around in the driver's seat.

The fleeing wagon was closely followed by a group of mounted and heavily armed men. From the tone of their voices, it would be reasonable to guess that they were less than friendly, the wagon's driver considered it best not to stop to confirm his assumption.

The coach continued its speedy withdrawal from the city. Ruts in the road did not ease their escape. Many times an onlooker could have sworn that only two of the carriage's wheels were touching the path. The other two wheels simply spun uselessly in the air. With every rut and turn, the sound of bottles being smashed and a man cursing could be heard coming from the carriage's insides.

As the carriage rumbled over a hill out of the horsemen's view. The leading cavalier slowed his horse and raised an armored fist. The signal was probably meant to be a motion for the other riders to halt, but if it was, the notion was lost on the not so sharp minds of the following riders. His companions simply continued riding until the leader made his command a little more explicit.

"HALT!"

Recognizing their leader's voice, the horses acknowledged the command and came to an abrupt stop. The riders on the other hand continued moving even after their mounts had halted. They sailed through the air until gravity suddenly realized what was happening and decided to put and end to everyone's fun. The rider's grunted as their bodies were introduced to the muddy ground. One of the rider's began to giggle a moment later.

"I guess we showed them that we don't take kindly to traveling miracle healers," stated the commander proudly. Attempting to ignore the stupidity of his troop.

"Showed who sir?" asked a knight, who was unsuccessfully attempting to lift himself up from the muddy path.

"Those men in the carriage," replied the commander in a tone best suited for conversations with first graders. Under the circumstances, he figured it would be appropriate.

"What carriage sir?" another soldier inquired in a very interested manner.

"The carriage we were following." The commander began to get somewhat annoyed.

The first soldier was beginning to look confused. The look seemed to fit him very well. "Carriage, I never saw any carriage."

"I love carriages!" added the giggling rider.

The commander let out a sigh which combined the emotions of disappointment, annoyance, and utter hopelessness. It was times like this when he tried not to think about the other job offers he had considered before accepting his current post. He could have been an admiral, sailing the oceans in search of some place people called the East. It would have been a wonderful life, but instead, he decided to join the army.

"You idiot! You've got your helmet on backwards," laughed a fellow cavalier.

"I do? Well what do you know? I have got it on backwards!"

A tear worked its way out of the commander's eye. With his head resting in his open palms, he began to weep.



The carriage rumbled to an awkward halt. The chubby driver hopped down from his seat atop the coach. Dressed in a rather gaudy manner, the man struck you as a fugitive from the local circus. It was also apparent that the local circus probably didn't want him back. No visible attempt seemed to have been made while dressing to conceal any of the man's extra weight. Quite the opposite actually, the man's clothes seemed to magnify his obtuse proportions. Accompanying his body was a face which fit perfectly.. His face gave him the appearance of a being an over-sized bulldog, too much skin, but not enough face.

"Well, I think we lost 'em," stated the man as he stepped around the carriage.

Nobody answered.

"I said, 'I think we lost 'em!'" he repeated.

Still, nobody answered.

"Hello!" He continued as he circled to the rear of the carriage. "Smiley? What are you doing in there?!?"

The man reached to knock on the carriage's door. As if the door suddenly sensed that it was about to be hit, it retaliated by throwing itself open. The chubby man was thrown to the ground with a great "Ooph!" If he had been tossed to the ground a few moments earlier, things would not have been so bad, but gravity was beginning to get angry because of how many attempts there had been at flying in the past few moments, that no mercy was extended in the force with which the man was placed on the ground.

The carriage dumped its contents across the muddy ground. The contents were mainly glass jars, two chests, a bath towel with the embroidered name of a local hotel chain, and another interestingly dressed man. The man seemed to be the larger man's companion in his effort to escape the circus. This man was of a much different shape. He was a tall lanky man. Lieing on his side he would have looked very similar to the other man standing up straight

"You know Omar?" The taller man began as he pushed himself up his muddy seat. "I had this great idea after this bottle hit me on the head. I can't remember it now because of another bottle which hit me on the head. All I remember is that I had a name for it. Plastic."

"Shut up and help me stand up, Smiley." Omar lyed on the ground like a helpless beached whale. Had it not been for his friend Smiley, he would have eventually dried up in the sun causing a horrible smell.

"What happened?" inquired the plump chap as he helped Smiley to his feet.

"That last bump we hit." started the man, somewhat disoriented. "That last bump was a killer. Everything fell from the shelves and most of bottles either spilled or broke. By the way, Omar, who taught you to drive?"

"Look!" cried Omar defensively. "I didn't hear anyone else volunteering to drive. I got us away from those guards didn't I?"

"All right, all right! Just help me pick up these jars."

Smiley bent down to begin picking up the few unscathed jars. He was somewhat thinner than Omar, but no less gaudy in fashion. Smiley spoke with the same sort of eloquence exhibited by his larger companion. It was obvious to see that they were both highly-skilled actors.

"We sure worked that town over, didn't we Smiley?" laughed Omar

"They fell for it hook, line, and sinker. How did we do before we were ‘asked' to leave?"

"Haven't had a chance to count the loot, but it's sure to-- Did any of these jars not spill?" Omar inquired as he held the broken fragments of a bottle in one hand and an empty one in the other.

Smiley frowned as he replied, "Not that I can tell."

"Take these bottles and find a stream of something. I'll stay here and try to clean up the mess and figure out where to go next."

Smiley grabbed an armful of empty bottles and tromped off in the search of water.

Omar Bumble and Jim Smiley had been partners in business for the past ten years. They had played nearly every scam possible. They had met in boarding school and became friends immediately. Well, immediately after Omar pummeled Smiley for tricking him into lighting his own hair on fire. From that day on, they had been kicked out of nearly every prominent city throughout all of Ataxia. Many of them twice. They had been forced to change their names so many times that neither could actually remember what the other's name had been originally.

At the current time, they were selling miracle cures. The miracle cures which they sold came in the form of a bottle with a label reading:

MIRRACUL ELICKSUR
Heels all nown alements including,
Flew, amonia, body odor, death, chicken pocks,
leprsy, smelly foots, broked legs, etc.

In no time, Smiley returned with his armful of bottles all full.

"I found a spring to fill the bottles," he responded as he placed his burden into the back of the stagecoach.

"Good, I've decided where our next stop shall be, Slander." Omar stated proudly as he folded up a map. One of Omar's talents had always been folding maps. His parents wished him to become a professional map-folder for a local cartographer, but his heart just wasn't in map folding.

Omar and Smiley climbed back onto the coach and set out on their voyage to Slander.



The streets of Slander were filled with throngs of people, as was the usual in the afternoon. People pushed their way through the crowds of people. Slander's markets were said to be the best in the world. It was said that if something could be found in Ataxia, it could be found in the markets of Slander. Millions of coins passed hands each day in the booming marketplace, not always with the previous consent of the donator. Naturally, a center of so many transactions could not go unnoticed by the darker side of society. Pickpockets and assassins flocked to the marketplace like flies to a casserole. Not only did this place attract thieves and cutthroats, but also its fair share of beggars and insurance salesmen.

Lister had spent the last three years of his life as a fairly successful beggar. He had risen rather quickly through the ranks of beggardom. This was partly due to his recent contraction of leprosy.

While the general populous feared leprosy like the plague--mainly because it was the plague--beggars dreamed of contracting the disease. Through the studies of Mathias, the most famous beggar of all-time, he proved that leprosy guaranteed an increase of at least 50% in profits. He showed up to a 300% increase was possible under the best conditions.

Prior to becoming a Slanderian beggar, Lister had experienced a somewhat unsuccessful life as a traveling tinker. His travels one day led him to the market of the booming city of Slander. He was immediately struck by the number of beggars and their surprising success. From that day forward, his tinkering days came to an end, and his days of beggaring began.

On this particular day, Lister was not actually beggaring, he was on a mission. It was about time the beggars of Slander organized, or so thought Lister and a few of his friends. Lister had been sent to inform all of the prominent beggars in his area of the first meeting.

Lister turned a corner to catch the sight of Tom. Tom was an old beggar who had begged for as long as anyone could remember. He was one of those "In my day..." sort of people who would annoy everyone with stories about what being a beggar was like years ago. Strangely, his stories of the past were not much different from what it was like to be a beggar now. It's pretty tough to make beggaring sound worse than it already is.

"Tom?" Lister said, less as a question and more as a statement of presence.

"Wha, wha, did somebody say my name?" inquired Tom.

Tom pretended that his hearing and eyesight was less than perfect. Money flowed more freely to those who are old and feeble. In truth, Tom had nearly the best hearing and eyesight in the entire city.

"Tom, I'm Lister," began Lister, extending his hand. After noticing Lister to be a leper, he shook Lister's hand happily. Not only had Tom been cursed with good eyesight and hearing, but also with the seeming inability to come down with leprosy, but he never quit trying. "I'm here on behalf of-- sorry, but could I get my hand back?"

Lister's hand, though his arm had returned to his side, had stayed in Tom's hand, which he was still shaking. This was a small problem with leprosy, the loss of limbs every now and then, but this was considered a small problem when compared with the profits associated with leprosy. Tom apologized and gave back the hand.

"Now, as I was saying," began Lister once again. "I am here on behalf of L.E.P.E.R., or "The Organization of Beggars and Lepers of Slander."

"An organization of beggars eh? You know, in my day we didn't have organizations. We had to fend for ourselves! Beggars hated each other, and we loved it!"

"I'm sure you did," agreed Lister, trying not to encourage the slightly senile beggar. "There've been some laws passed by the governor which are putting the stranglehold on us beggars."

"Laws?!? In my day, we didn't have laws! We were mugged everyday, and we loved it!"

"OK, just take this card, and we hope to see you there tonight under the bridge."

Lister handed a card to Tom that was supposed to be a reminder of the meeting, but due to the illiteracy of beggars, the cards had been swiped from a local tailor shop. The card read: Flint's Tailor Shop 5 gold off your next purchase.

"Bridges?!? In my day, we didn't have bridges! If we wanted to cross a river, we swam! Of course, back then the rivers were full of crocodiles." Lister was far down the street by this time, but in the distance he could hear, "We loved it!"



Melzar's eyes panned across the bleak landscape. It seemed a real shame to classify the scene in front of Melzar as "landscape." Classifying this view of scorched and decimated earth as a "landscape" would be a demeaning injustice to the many other normal, Gods-fearing landscapes in existence such as forests and meadows. No, this was definitely not "landscape."

Dead bodies lay strewn across the blistered soil. Surprisingly few vultures were feeding on the carrion; most were too busy calling relatives concerning feasts and dinners they would be hosting. Above all of this destruction lingered a stench, a very odd stench. Most stenches result from pungent objects being left out in the sun for too long. This stench was somewhat different; it had descended on the land due to their being a stench left out in the sun for too long.

Standing high above this desolate wasteland, the black silhouette of the great wizard, Melzar, could be seen atop his tower of ebony. Melzar was your common stereotypical evil wizard: black flowing robe, wrinkled skin, evil glowing eyes, the whole works. Well, the whole works minus one volume. This volume happened to be located at the end of his chin where a beard should have been.

It was quite difficult to be a proper wizard, even a kind-hearted one, without the aid of a long flowing beard. For years, his beardlessness had been a cause of no small amount of turmoil and grief. Had it not been for the wizard academy's rule that all applicants are required to have a beard of at least two feet in length, Melzar would have been a great kind-hearted magician in the service of some king. But no, they turned him away, and as a result, turned him to the evil side of magic.

He had made many attempts at correcting his hairlessness. Hours had been spent high in his tower mixing the components of spells to cure this problem. He had even spent twenty gold coins on the purchase of Dr. Bumble's Magical Hair Growth Elixir, but nothing had worked.

"Master?" ventured a timid voice behind Melzar.

Melzar turned from his quite vigil to address the speaker, who turned out to be a handpuppet upon his own hand, which had been behind his back. It seemed to have been the product of an old athletic sock for a body, two black buttons for eyes, and a red marker employed to draw lips and a tongue.

"Yes Gord?" inquired the wizard.

"Master, what is wrong? You do not seem to be your same evil self today," asked the puppet.

"I have been thinking..."

"Master, you know what the psychiatrist told you about thinking."

Whenever the puppet spoke, Melzar's lips could be seen moving slightly.

"It's just that... I mean... well..."

"Master, you can tell me. I'm your best friend. Go on," encouraged Gord.

Melzar strode thoughtfully from the balcony to his throne room. Being connected to Melzar's hand and as such, having little say in his movement, followed the wizard to the throneroom.

"Gord, I'm bored."

Gord pulled back in surprise at his Master's last statement.

"Master, how could you be bored? You are the supreme dictator over an entire world. You kill millions of people everyday, and don't even think twice about it. People would die to have your power. To tell the truth, many have."

Melzar sat upon his gold encrusted throne. He leaned his head on his hand, in a thoughtful manner.

"Master! That hurts," cried Gord.

"Sorry," he said while switching head rests.

A few minutes passed while Melzar was lost in thought. Gord had learned long ago that you never interrupt a thinking wizard. This is partly due to their rather short temper but mostly because they could be pondering a spell like Moiré's Do-it-yourself Supernova. A slight startle could cause the wizard to suddenly blurt out the magic words, and-- let's just say that it isn't a pretty picture.

Then, as if he had suddenly heard the ringing of an ice cream truck, he instantly looked forward.

"I know what I've got to do!" Melzar stated as if he had just reached the top of Mt. Everest.

"Master, what do you have to do?" Gord was clearly excited.

"I've got to find something to excite my life."

Humans are masters at stating the obvious. Melzar, being a wizard, had many extraordinary and enhanced abilities or powers. One of these enhanced abilities was stating the obvious. He was a pro.

"Master, do you wish me to hire an assassin?" Gord inquired in an attempt to be helpful.

"No assassins. They just aren't a match for me anymore. The last one you hired didn't even get past the door. Remember the one that I killed in my sleep? The guards had to tell me in the morning because I never woke up. No, assassins are out."

"Master, what if we insight a rebellion?"

"Those stupid rebellions are easier to crush than a walnut."

"Master, what if..." Gord did not finish his sentence because Melzar's other hand had grown weary of Gord's babbling and decided to restrict the movement of his mouth.

Gord looked up to see Melzar doing something he had never seen the wizard do before. The old man was smiling. Actually, his mouth wasn't smiling. Melzar's brain had sent a message to his mouth instructing it to smile. While the message was traveling towards the mouth, it ran into a few friends who invited it to the pituitary gland for lunch. Three hours later the message finally reached its target, but by that time, the message was inebriated. This resulted in a mere smirk.

"I know what to do to ease my boredom!" Melzar stated triumphantly, while, as far as he knew, smiling.

"Master? What is it? Tell me! What is it?" Handpuppets are very excitable.

"I will conquer another world!" Melzar announced as he commenced with a few minutes of maniacal laughter.

Gord thought the idea was wonderful but wished the suspense would have lasted for slightly longer. Nevertheless, evil characters never miss a chance to laugh maniacally.



A carriage rumbled towards the city gates. The gates of Slander had once been named one of the Seven Wonders of the Galaxy. It was an attempt by the Slanderian government to increase the tourism. The scheme had worked for a time. In other words, the plot worked great until people arrived and actually saw the gates.

Structurally speaking, the gates were no different than any other gate you would find on a city. It was supported by two large guard towers, had a steel gate, and looked pretty normal, structurally that is. What made this particular gate stand out, was the simple fact that for some bizarre reason, the whole thing was painted mauve.

Years previous, the governor had passed a law which put a tax on painter's brushes. Obviously, the painters' guild was infuriated. As a result, the painters' guild secretly painted the entire gate and gatehouse. They chose mauve because it was the guild's colors mauve and turquoise; it didn't look half bad on the basketball uniforms. The governor ordered the guild to repaint the building or be imprisoned. The order was revoked after the guild threatened to paint the royal palace turquoise.

The coach pulled to a stop in front of the closing gate. The larger of the two men on the carriage stood to address the guards on the towers.

"We request admittance to this fine city," yelled Omar.

"Go away!" called the guard. "We never admit people to the city after dark."

Omar looked at the sky to verify his assumption that it wasn't after dark; it was barely after noon.

"What do you mean after dark?!?" Omar was beginning to get angry; it didn't take much.

I am convinced that there is a direct correlation between weight and anger. The bigger one is, the angrier they can get. It's as if their large size holds more anger. This is true for everyone I know, even Santa Claus. I imagine him, around July, yelling profanities at his little elf helpers, who, because of their very small size, are unable to be angry enough to fight back.

The guard looked towards the sky as if he hadn't noticed that day had crept up on him only a mere six hours ago. When his eyes were facing towards the sky, he made his best shot at being startled, which looked more like he tripped on a rock.

"Well, what do you know? It is daytime," the guard said with a fake smile. His beaming face was extinguished by the coldness in Omar's glance.

"So, can we enter the city?"

"No," the guard paused. "We don't allow mimes into the city."

"Mimes?!?" Omar had taken enough. He had been called every bad name imaginable throughout his travels, but no one had ever had the nerve to call him a mime. "Do we look like mimes? Rather, do we sound like mimes?"

Omar's anger had gotten about as high as his navel.

"You never know, your friend could be a ventriloquist."

"Look! We are not mimes, and he," pointing to Jim, "is not a ventriloquist!"

The anger had now reached his armpits.

"Well maybe you aren't a mime, but you could have some hidden in the back of your carriage. We'll have to come down and check."

The anger was beginning to spill out the top of his head and form a puddle on the ground. He was so angry that he couldn't even say anything, he just sat down and waited for the guards. In the meantime he turned to Jim.

"Can you believe this?"

Jim opened his eyes and let out a large yawn. Smacking his lips he responded, "What did you say?"

"You've been sleeping all this time?"

"I think so. I couldn't really tell because I was asleep," Jim hadn't regained all his senses yet from his nap.

Omar made a great effort to say something to Jim, but the only things that would come out were garbled mumbles. He finally resorted to merely letting out a sigh of disgust.

"Hey," started Jim. "what's that puddle on the ground?"

Four guards stepped from the guard tower. They were heavily armed and looked like they were serious about this inspection.

"Don't worry, this will only take a moment," stated a guard as they circled the carriage.

The platoon disappeared into the carriage. They reemerged two minutes later.

"OK!" yelled a guard towards the gatekeeper. "No mimes, let'em in!"

The gate slowly lifted and the carriage rumbled through. Omar's anger had begun evaporating off, but it would remain at a critical level for the next half-hour.



Continue to Chapter 2

L.E.P.E.R: Prologue

This is the first in a series of posts wherein I have presented a novel I started writing in high school. Please read the introduction post (link) for an explanation.



Scientists believe that the universe began with an enormous explosion called the "Big Bang." This theory is all well and good, but what was before this explosion. Scientists have no idea. Actually, they just plain try to avoid the question. They have a sort of sixth sense that lets them know when someone is going to ask what came before the "Big Bang". Just try it. Go up to a scientist and ask, "What was around before the 'Big Bang?'" I'll be willing to bet money that right before you pop the question, he'll need to use the restroom and will stay either until you leave or until the restroom starts to smell.

Now back to the beginning of the universe. Scientists have come quite close to the actual start of the universe. They do have one thing wrong though; it wasn't exactly a "Big" Bang. It was actually a fairly small bang in comparison to what it did. It was a bang not much bigger than a house in size and rather minuscule in the noise department, but what it lacked in strength, it made up for in effect. This "Little Bang" this is how the experts like to refer to it was like the first domino in a series of hundreds. The domino is quite small and doesn't make much noise when it falls, but it causes plenty.

Another discrepancy with the "Big Bang" idea is what caused it. Scientists have had little experience in dealing with this question because when it finally comes up, they are usually in the restroom, waiting for the interrogator to leave.

To explain the phenomenon of the "Little Bang," the first question that must be answered is the question of what came before the bang. The bang was not actually the beginning of the universe; it was more like the dispersing of it. There was plenty of matter around, but it was all in one place. This one place is referred to as the Mansion of the Gods.

The Gods lived for eons in the Mansion of the Gods. It is impossible to know exactly or even approximately how long they were around before the "Little Bang," but according to the great historian, Therin Binsbury, "It was a long time." The reason it is impossible to measure this time is because Gods have no notion of time. Time was not something for which Gods care. Time is something which was dreamt up by mortals to measure the length of life. Since Gods are not mortal, they have nothing to measure and hence, have no use for time. This does make it difficult to invite others for tea, but for that matter, Gods aren't too keen on tea.

Gods may not like tea, but one thing that they do like is destroying and blowing things up. Sure, they make worlds and populate them with millions of people, but they always have it in mind to zap it when enough people are around. It is this such instinct that led to an experiment which the Gods attempted one afternoon it's always afternoon to a God. One of the younger Gods was sent to shut off the power to the house. The rest of the Gods commenced to put strips of tin foil in the light sockets, where the foil formed a "U" and was inserted much like an electrical plug. I remind you that Gods like anything which is somewhat destructive or likely to cause an explosion. They had no idea what would happen, but they were pretty sure it would be exciting.

To say the result was exciting would not be unlike saying that the Atlantic Ocean is "kinda big." The result was extraordinary. "Wow," is all that was said in response when Zeus was asked about the event. Words would no do the event justice, but here goes a worthy attempt. Upon the resurgence of power into the mansion's electrical outlets, everything got bright for a split second then went dark. The only words which were spoken were those belonging to Thor, "Bummer! That su "

The sentence was left unfinished or perhaps merely unheard due to the sudden explosion of sparks from the outlets. The first thoughts in their minds should have been, "RUN FOR COVER!!!!" But, as stated before, Gods were the universe's first pyro- and electromaniacs, and as such running for cover was, like time, yet to be conceived by the Gods. The next occurrence was even more amazing to their maniacal minds. The house just exploded in an amazing display of fireworks and electricity.

After the explosion, bits of the mansion were floating all across the newly created universe. The Gods were still in a daze from the astounding display of destruction that had just occurred. Flowing from many of the Gods' eyes were tears of joy and ecstasy. If Gods had acknowledged time, a great deal of it would have passed before they were sober enough to speak in something other than mumbles and stuttered tones.

Eventually the Gods looked around themselves and realized what had actually happened. The sight around them was magnificent. It was the second greatest thing they had ever witnessed. What they saw was the beginnings of the universe, planets, solar systems, and stars. They would have something to describe the feeling as if they had ever gone to Kindergarten, and seen the first sight of the playground, eyes wide with the visual delicacy of swings, monkey bars, and slides. But because they did not acknowledge time, they never knew when to go out to recess, so they were unable to explain their experience.

The universe was quickly divvied up amongst the Gods. As is common with the more immature group of any race, the younger Gods queried, "What do we get?" The older Gods looked somewhat annoyed, for none of them wished to part with any area of the universe of which they had so recently come into control. Luckily, there was a collection of planets and stars on the far side of the universe which no one had been willing to take. The younger Gods, being somewhat more dim than their older comrades, were more than overjoyed that they should be given a galaxy of their own to control.

The reason for this area of the cosmos not being claimed would be due to the fact that in the galactic real estate business, it was deemed less than prime. The galaxy was less a galaxy and more a large conglomeration of spheres, each of which contained within, one or two planets and a sun around which they revolved. A few hundred of these spheres had been smooshed together and thrown out into the cosmos. The result was not unlike what happens when a bag of marshmallows is poured into the microwave; then, cooked on high.

It is here, within this sorry excuse for a galaxy and under the hands of a group of Gods whose combined IQ might be enough to drool on oneself, that our story takes place. It is here, in the galaxy of Ataxia.



Continue to Chapter 1

L.E.P.E.R

In high school I aspired to be an author. I began work on a novel during my senior year and continued to work on it off and on during my freshman year of college. Sadly, one thing led to another, and I never made it further than the 5th chapter. Although I still try to write as much as possible, and have even been published a few times, I have yet to return to my dream of writing fiction. Maybe one day I shall... who knows?

A while back I stumbled upon a draft of the first five chapters of my novel. The title of the book is "L.E.P.E.R". It is comedy sci-fi/fantasy. Think of a cross between Douglas Adams (Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy) and Terry Pratchett (Discworld). At the behest of a friend, I have decided to provide the draft here for your perusal.

A few disclaimers first. I wrote this during my senior year of high school and my freshman year of college. That was 11 years ago. This is a draft, so there are plenty of mistakes. I thought about proofreading it before posting it, but frankly, I'm too lazy. I'm sure there are plenty of spelling errors and grammatical errors. If I remember correctly, there's even a character whose name mysteriously changes halfway through. Maybe I fixed that at some point; I'm not sure. Also, I am sad to say that there was once a collection of humorous footnotes that accompanied the text. Sadly, the footnotes have been lost at some point. If I can ever find them, I will be sure to add them back. Lastly, one benefit of me having written this so long ago is that you are welcome to criticize it all you want. I've become sufficiently emotionally detached.

With no further ado, here is L.E.P.E.R:

Book of Mormon Historicity: Archeology

This is the fourth (and final) in a series of posts wherein I explain reasons why I do not believe in the Book of Mormon. Please read the introduction post (link) for an explanation.

The following is excerpted from the Smithsonian's official statement regarding the Book of Mormon, "Smithsonian archeologists see no direct connection between the archeology of the New World and the subject matter of the book."

Mormon scholars have attempted to stretch the archeological record for decades, in order to create evidence for the Book of Mormon. Quetzalcoatl is one such example. I was always taught that the Quetzalcoatl mythology was a clear smoking-gun of Christ's visit to the Americas. Years later, there are few Mormon scholars who would make that claim anymore.

I have yet to find a single bit of supposed archeological evidence that is not extremely spurious. When scholars are pointing to such sketchy finds as NHM being the resting place of Ishmael, you know that there isn't a lot to hold onto. That said, if you do know of some good archeological evidence, let me know.

Just as Spanish, French, and Italian still bare a strong resemblance to their mother tongue, Latin, we should see a strong link between Native American language and its supposed mother tongue, Hebrew. We do not. Some Mormon scholars attempt to stretch the evidence to imply that we do, but it's pretty weak evidence (and could easily be a result of post-Columbus interaction).

We also fail to see the cultural footprint of Book of Mormon peoples. We fail to see Hebrew architecture or religion or culture or anything that might conceivably link ancient American society with its alleged Hebrew source. For a people so concerned with Jesus Christ, we would conceivably expect to see some vestige of Christian worship in the Americas. We do not. We see nothing of the kind.

One thing that makes Book of Mormon archeology difficult is the very fact that scholars cannot even agree on where the events took place. Most Mormon scholars now believe that the events took place in Mesoamerica. This has led to such obtuse theories as the two-Cumorah theory. But there are some who claim that the events took place in New England. This is much more inline with what Joseph Smith taught regarding the subject of the Book of Mormon. He clearly taught that the Book of Mormon peoples dwelled in the region of New York, but this carries many major problems as well.

Ultimately, what is most telling for me is the fact that the only scholars who see any connection between Mesoamerican and Book of Mormon culture, language, and genetics are those who are Mormon. There are no independent, unbiased scholars who give any credence to the claims of Hebrew descent for the Native Americans. One could accuse non-Mormon scholars of hiding evidence so as to discredit the Book of Mormon. But that would be a pretty strong accusation. I can't imagine that any archeologists care enough about Mormonism to commit fraud.

Wednesday, November 26, 2008

Book of Mormon Historicity: Translation

This is the third in a series of posts wherein I explain reasons why I do not believe in the Book of Mormon. Please read the introduction post (link) for an explanation.

I recently watched the movie Emma Smith: My Story. I had to laugh out loud when Joseph Smith was first presented translating the plates. There was this great scene where Joseph was sitting across from Emma. The plates were open before him. He was reading aloud as his finger traced his position in the text. He looked as if we were just reading the plates directly. The Urim and Thummim were nowhere in sight. For that matter, neither is the seer stone and hat he used in the translation either.

I was raised being taught that Joseph used the Urim and Thummim like spectacles to translate the Book of Mormon text from the gold plates. He would separate himself from his scribe with a curtain. I had also been taught that he eventually became sufficiently versed in Reformed Egyptian, that he no longer needed the Urim and Thummim to translate. Most of my Mormon readers were probably raised with the same understanding of the translation process.

The truth regarding the translation process is much different. Russell M. Nelson discussed the method of how the Book of Mormon was translated in the July 1993 Ensign. In an article entitled "A Treasured Testament" (link) he quotes from David Whitmer, who explains how the translation took place.

“Joseph Smith would put the seer stone into a hat, and put his face in the hat, drawing it closely around his face to exclude the light; and in the darkness the spiritual light would shine. A piece of something resembling parchment would appear, and on that appeared the writing. One character at a time would appear, and under it was the interpretation in English. Brother Joseph would read off the English to Oliver Cowdery, who was his principal scribe, and when it was written down and repeated to Brother Joseph to see if it was correct, then it would disappear, and another character with the interpretation would appear. Thus the Book of Mormon was translated by the gift and power of God, and not by any power of man.”
(David Whitmer, An Address to All Believers in Christ, Richmond, Mo.: n.p., 1887, p. 12.)


Now what is this seer stone to which Mr. Whitmer refers? One might think that it is a reference to the Urim and Thummim. On the contrary, it is a polished stone he found while digging a well as a youth. He would peer into this stone and claim to see hidden treasure. He was hired on a number of occasions to find treasure, using his seer stone. It should be noted that he never found any. So, Joseph was translating with a stone that he had previously used, unsuccessfully, for the purpose of finding treasure. To me, this seems very suspect.

It is also interesting to note that Joseph would generally translate without the gold plates. Usually the plates would be sitting on a shelf, under a cloth. Joseph would instead use his seer stone and hat for the translation. This, of course, begs the question of why the plates were even necessary. If it was not even necessary for him to look at the plates during the translation process, why did God bother putting him and his family in such grave danger by having him hold onto the plates.

I also am led to question why we never hear the true story of the translation. From the Ensign quote above, he see that the true story is neither a secret nor heretical. And yet, we never hear this story in Sunday School. Movies are made (often by the church) which give a false portrayal of the events. But I suppose I understand why the true story is not portrayed. Frankly, it is pretty weird.

To illuminate another reason I doubt that Joseph translated the Book of Mormon, we need to fast forward a few years to another book translated by Joseph, the Book of Abraham. For those who are unfamiliar with the origin of the Book of Abraham, it was allegedly translated, by Joseph Smith, from a number of ancient Egyptian scrolls. The three facsimiles are reproductions of images from the scrolls. The interpretations of said images were provided by Joseph.

It may surprise people that we actually have possession of these scrolls. They were returned to the church, after having been lost, a few decades back. There was a lot of excitement at the time. A lot has transpired since Joseph's time with regards to Egyptology. For one thing, we deciphered the Rosetta Stone, which means there are many people who can translate Egyptian now. Here was an opportunity to prove Joseph's translating powers. The church promised to print the forthcoming translation in the Improvement Era. That was their intention up until the point that it was discovered that Joseph's translation was completely bunk.

The scrolls are actually funeral texts that were very common in the era. They make no mention of Abraham, much less the creation, Kolob, or the pre-mortal existence. Joseph's interpretation of the facsimiles is so completely distant from the actual translation, that it's nearly laughable. It should be no surprise that the church decided to not publish the translations and has largely attempted to sweep this all under the rug.

The reason I mention the Book of Abraham in a discussion of the Book of Mormon is to establish precedent. Joseph Smith clearly lied about his ability to translate the Book of Abraham. He lied about his interpretation of the facsimiles. He most likely fabricated the scriptural text. Therefore, if he lied about the Book of Abraham, is it too far of a stretch to believe he did the same with the Book of Mormon?

Tuesday, November 25, 2008

Book of Mormon Historicity: Anachronisms

This is the second in a series of posts wherein I explain reasons why I do not believe in the Book of Mormon. Please read the introduction post (link) for an explanation.

The definition of anachronism is "The representation of someone as existing or something as happening in other than chronological, proper, or historical order." Anachronisms are things that are out of place in a time period, like a Roman soldier wearing a wristwatch, or a Muslim in the time of Christ.

The Book of Mormon is full of anachronisms. Here is a list of just some of the anachronisms that appear in the Book of Mormon text: elephants, horses, barley, steel, cimiters, metal swords, chariots, silk, compasses, "Christ", "adieu", coins. Individually one can explain some of these away by saying that we just haven't found record of them in the New World. The problem comes at the shear enormity of things that are mentioned which are out of place chronologically or geographically.

Let's say that there is a 20% chance that there were actually elephants in the Americas at the time of the Book of Mormon. And let's say there was a 20% chance that there were horses. The probability that there were both, is 4%. If the probability that there were metal swords that we've never found is also 20%, then we now have a .8% chance of all three. As you can see, the probability drops pretty quickly when taking unlikely events in aggregate.

Another form of anachronism is the presence of 19th century theological thought within the Book of Mormon. It seems odd that the Book of Mormon peoples would live in a very similar theological environment to the one in which Joseph himself lived.

The teachings of Nehor and Korihor are very similar to the teachings of Universalists. In Joseph's day they were considered by many to be an affront to traditional Christianity, as they taught universal salvation. It's interesting that a philosophy that was making such strong headway in 19th century America is the heresy of choice in ancient America.

Due to some recent murders in the area, the Masons were also a popular target of social derision and suspicion. Many have noticed the similarity between the Masons and the secret combinations of the Gadianton Robbers. It's ironic that Joseph would later become a very high ranking mason himself.

There is also a striking resemblance between much of the doctrine in the Book of Mormon with 19th century Methodist teachings, especially with regards to the conversion pattern. I cannot possibly hope to do this issue justice, so I encourage interested parties to read "An Insider's View of Mormon Origins" by Grant H. Palmer (link). He approaches this subject in some depth and it is fascinating.

One thing I will mention, that is addressed at length by Palmer, is the occurrence of a Methodist tent meeting near Palmyra during Joseph's childhood. The preacher was a certain Pastor Benjamin. As one reads the news clippings concerning the event, it is stunning. The similarity of the event to the first few chapters of Mosiah is undeniable. A tower was built. People came, placing their tents so that they were facing the tower from which the preacher spoke. Those who confessed Jesus had their names recorded. It was as striking coincidence.

Another anachronism is the appearance of King James language throughout the Book of Mormon. As you know, Nephi obtained the Brass Plates from Laban, which gave him and his descendants access to large portions of the Old Testament. Nephi quoted freely from Isaiah and clearly had a record of Moses and others. Arguably, since these records come from at least 600 BC (probably earlier because of their having been written on Brass Plates), one would expect the accuracy of Mormon's source material to be superior to those used to make the King James Version. Also, Mormon and Joseph were both translating through the power of God. Therefore, one would expect their translations to be even better as a result. Nevertheless, we do not see that in practice.

The text appearing in the Book of Mormon is almost always the same as the KJV. Though, there are a few places where it differs. One would expect that, as we find older manuscripts, we would see the text coming more in sync with that presented in the Book of Mormon (and the JST). We do not. Quite the contrary, we see the text diverging in places where Joseph did not change the text and staying the same in places where he did. In fact, many well-known mistakes from the KJV have been perpetuated in the Book of Mormon. Why would mistakes made by 17th century scholars also appear in a 600 BC record? The most likely explanation is that that Joseph copied this sections from the KJV Bible directly.

Monday, November 24, 2008

Book of Mormon Historicity: Genetics

This is the first in a series of posts wherein I explain reasons why I do not believe in the Book of Mormon. Please read the introduction post (link) for an explanation.

Recent technological advances have given us very powerful tools for determining ancestry through genetic markers. I will not go into depth about these techniques at this time (mainly because I only have a cursory knowledge myself). Suffice it to say that there is no genetic evidence that the ancestors of Native Americans were Israelite, not a bit.

On the contrary, there is voluminous genetic evidence that the original inhabitants of America were of East Asian descent. One need only compare the appearance of East Asians with that of Native Americans; the similarity is undeniable. But one need not trust their eyes, the genetic record tells the same story. This fits in very well with the long defended argument that the first human inhabitants of America came by way of a land bridge across the Bering Strait.

Another interesting thing to note regarding Book of Mormon genetics is the limited amount of diversity we should expect to see. Mitochondrial DNA is passed down directly from one's mother. There is no cross-over during meiosis, so it makes for a very useful tool in determining ancestry. Nephi and company only had two unique sets of Mitochondrial DNA (Sariah, Ishmael's wife). This should make spotting these DNA markers very easy, as they would have only diverged by mutations over the past 2,600 years. In truth, the DNA shows much higher genetic drift than could occur in the above situation.

There is only one reasonable argument, that I have heard, to combat this genetic issue. If Nephi and family came to an already populated American continent, their genetic markers could have been covered up by the genetic markers of the larger population already here. The big problem with this argument is that one would need to explain what people are doing crossing the Bering Strait millenia prior to the Fall of Adam. We also have to wonder why the Book of Mormon authors make special mention of the Mulekites and finding the extinct Jaredite nation, but fail to mention an even larger civilization all around them.

Is the Book of Mormon True?

I have recently been thinking about the Book of Mormon. This is probably due to a recent comment asking me what I believed regarding the origin of the Book of Mormon. For me, the evidence is overwhelming that the book cannot possibly be historically accurate. If one considers the Book of Mormon as a literal record of early American inhabitants, there are enormous problems that must be considered. Let's face it, science has not been kind to the Book of Mormon (or Christianity as a whole for that matter).

This has caused me to wonder what others (especially active Mormons) think about the historicity of the Book of Mormon. I have recently asked a few friends and acquaintances concerning their views on this issue. Do you believe that the Book of Mormon is literally true? In other words, was Nephi a real man who traveled from Jerusalem to the Americas around 600 BC? Or, is the Book of Mormon simply an inspirational book whose historicity is irrelevant to its core message of Jesus Christ being the savior of mankind? Or, is it something more complicated? I'd love to hear people's thoughts on this issue.

I have also decided to post the evidences that cause me to discredit the literal historicity of the Book of Mormon. Rather than do so in one huge unwieldy post, I will do so episodically over the next few days. I will break the evidence into separate categories and address each individually. This should be a little easier to digest for readers.

As always, I would love to hear people's comments. If I make any glaring mistakes in my claims (especially facts), do not hesitate to call me out. Also, it is not my intention to offend or attack anyone's beliefs. I simply want to express how I personally feel. If you think you might be offended by what I am going to write, please do not read any of the forthcoming posts.

Saturday, November 22, 2008

Same-Sex Marriage Bad, Civil Unions Good.

I have heard the same refrain from most Mormons throughout the long and arduous debate over Prop 8 and same-sex marriage. Proponents of Prop 8 claim that it their support has nothing to do with discrimination. They always claim to be in favor of civil unions and gay rights, just so long as the word marriage is not used. They claim that they have absolutely no ill-will towards gays. In fact, they also seem to have a bunch of friends who are gay, at least, they claim as much.

Well, if that's the case (that you are so in favor of civil unions), then why did the predominantly Mormon state of Utah pass a constitutional amendment in 2004 explicitly denying gay couples the opportunity to have civil unions? Here is the text of the amendment (link):

  1. Marriage consists only of the legal union between a man and a woman.
  2. No other domestic union, however denominated, may be recognized as a marriage or given the same or substantially equivalent legal effect.
If you all are such big fans of civil unions, then why did you vote them down in 2004?

So, what are we to make of the pro-civil union rhetoric that we have been hearing out of the church and its membership for the past few months? Does this mean that Mormons have changed their opinions about civil unions and domestic partnerships? Does this mean that members of the church are going to line up in support of providing all of the legal benefits of marriage to civil unions? Or was it just election-time rhetoric?

We shall see, and we won't have to wait very long. A gay-rights group called Equality Utah (link) has picked up the fight here in Utah. They are taking the church at its words and are introducing 5 bills into the Utah legislature to secure legal rights for the those who wish to enter into civil unions (link). They have called on the church to make good on their statements by aiding in their efforts to secure these rights.

The church has definitely painted itself into a corner. In order to not come off as bigots, the church was forced to make certain concessions in the fight for Prop 8. Those concessions are coming back to haunt them. If they come out in opposition to these legislative measures, they will look very hypocritical. I highly doubt they would come out in favor of the measures. That would be such a 180 degree reversal. Though, I would welcome such a reversal of policy. Ultimately, they will probably remain silent on the issue. Equality Utah has been trying to remove this option from the LDS church by actively and openly asking for their support. If the church does remain silent on the issue, that itself will speak volumes.

Thursday, November 20, 2008

Is the LDS Church Shrinking?

I have a degree with Mathematics, so it goes without saying that I enjoy the company of numbers. I love combing through statistics, looking for interesting correlations. It is this interest which led me recently to look at religious identification numbers from the US Census Bureau.

Comparing religious affiliation numbers between churches is not easy. Every church has there own method of reporting membership numbers. The LDS church reports everyone who has ever been baptized. Other churches, especially those with no formal membership concept, may report the number of people who attend each week. So, how does one actually compare membership numbers between sects? The best way is by asking people what religion they belong to, regardless of whether or not that church actually considers them a member. Since religion is an issue of belief, it seems reasonable to compare based upon belief, rather than membership.

The US Census Bureau has performed a study to determine US church membership based upon this identification, and the numbers are very intriguing (link). The data compares identification in 1990 with 2001. It only deals with adult population (which I consider a good idea when discussing religion).

Those who identified themselves as Mormon in 1990 totaled 2.48 million. In 2001 the number has grown to 2.78 million, giving a 12% gain over the 11 years. That seems like a strong growth number. But one must look at another factor when considering these numbers. The adult population, in the same time period, has grown from 175 million to 207 million, a growth of 18.5%. Therefore, if the Mormon church was not converting anyone, simply accounting for growth based upon the growth of population, the church should have had 2.94 million members in 2001. There is a shortfall of about 160,000 members or a growth of -6%. In other words, convert growth for the Mormon church in the United States is actually negative, the number of people leaving has exceeded the number joining.

This is not an isolated fact. A lot of Christian congregations have been seeing negative convert growth. While Christianity (in whole) has seen total growth of 5.29%, their convert growth has dropped to -13%. But this drop in membership was not felt equally among all groups. Evangelism and non-congregational Christianity seems to have been cannibalizing on the other Christian sects, as their numbers have increased. The study does note though that, since no options were provided, loosely-affiliated groups (like non-denominational and evangelical) can fluctuate a lot.

The religions that saw real growth were the non-Christian religions. Religions such as Islam, Buddhism, and Hindu saw huge growth (32% real, 14% convert). Some of that may be due to immigration, but I have my doubts. If someone wants to research that, I'd love to hear the results.

The biggest winner though was the atheists, humanists, and agnostics. Those who did not specify a religion climbed from 8% of the population to 14%. That means they had a convert growth of 87%. That's pretty astounding.

I'm not too surprised by these numbers though. Christianity has been seeing massive growth over the past 50 to 60 years. We, as a nation, are far more religious than we even were during the time of the Founding Fathers. Christianity, as a percentage of population, topped out around 90%. There weren't many people left to convert. The only way to go was down.

I also input all of the numbers into a spreadsheet on Google Docs if anyone wants to look at it (link).

Thursday, November 13, 2008

Why Blame Mormons for Prop 8?

The Mormon church has been experiencing a lot of blowback since Nov 4. There have been protests and demonstrations at temples and meetinghouses all across California. The protests have even extended past the borders of California. There were protests as far away as NYC where reportedly 10,000 people gathered. I myself attended a protest/rally held in front of the Church Office Building and Salt Lake Temple. This has clearly not been good PR for the Mormons.

Mormons are obviously confused as to why they are being singled out. As a commenter posted on my previous post, "But why go after the LDS Church in general when the voting members of the LDS Church consisted of an estimated mere 2-5% of the Yes vote?" Let me explain why the LDS church is being targeted. It is true that Mormons make up a small portion of the California electorate. Nevertheless, according to "Mormons For 8" (link), of the roughly $32 million in pro-Prop 8 contributions, 48% was donated by Mormons. That's a total of over $15 million. It also turns out that about $5 million of the money donated by Mormons came from out of state. That's 1/6 of the budget to pass Prop 8 coming from out-of-state Mormons. This money was used to create advertisements and spread propaganda that was full of lies and deception.

Money was not the only form of support offered by members of the church. If you lived in California, Prop 8 was discussed ad nauseum over the pulpit. People were strongly encouraged to give of their time to knock doors and make phone calls. The church setup phone centers here in Utah to call potential voters in California. Church leaders gave speeches declaring that this was something that God wanted the members of the church to focus on. I have spoken previously of the lies that were spread by church leaders.

One thing to note as well is that the Mormon leaders have a stronger sway on their membership than most congregations. Few evangelists believe that Pat Robertson speaks for and in behalf of God. On the contrary, it is a core tenet of Mormon doctrine that when the Prophet speaks, it is non different than if the Lord himself had come down and spoken (D&C 1:38). It leaves those who disagree in a very difficult situation.

Ultimately, I have no qualms saying that without the vast support of the Mormon church, Prop 8 would not have passed.

Wednesday, November 05, 2008

The Winds of Change are Blowing

I, like many Americans, thrilled in the election of Barack Obama last night. It was an emotional night of joy in his victory, in America's victory. But the presidential election was not the only fight on my mind. As President-elect Obama took the stand to deliver his acceptance speech, 20% of Californian precincts were reporting and Prop 8 was showing a 12% lead. It was a bitter-sweet moment.

I stayed up until 4am in hopes of seeing the tide turn and Prop 8 be struck down. There was a moment of hope as the lead dropped to a mere 4%, but the gap failed to close further. And here we are, 11:32 pm on the night of November 5th. Prop 8 has passed and same-sex marriage has been banned in California by constitutional amendment.

As I drove around running errands this morning I was happy for Obama's victory, but sad for the passing of Prop 8. But then I began to think about what had happened. I took hope. In 2000, California passed Proposition 22, which led to the definition of marriage as a man and a woman. Proposition 22 passed by a margin of 22%. Eight years later, Proposition 8 comes before the electorate and wins by 4%. Clearly, the winds are changing.

I examined the demographic information of voters, provided by CNN's website. Only 39% of people between the ages of 18 and 29 voted in favor of the proposition. With each passing year, more and more open-minded youth enter the electorate. Also, more and more people come to the conclusion that discrimination based upon sexual preference is wrong. In 2000, if I had lived in California, I would have voted in favor of Proposition 22. My views have changed a lot in the past eight years, and I'm not the only one.

We have not seen the end of same-sex marriage. California will vote on this again in 2010 or 2012 or 2016. It may take a few years, but time is on our side. Eventually same-sex marriage will be legalized, and it won't be long. I suspect that my grandchildren will look back with surprise that there was an era when people looked at homosexuals any differently than heterosexuals.

A tree can push against the wind for only so long before it snaps and gives way. The winds are blowing and they don't appear to be letting up anytime soon.